Jonny
Leon
English
102-111
January
23, 2012
SWA #3
The Use of Arguments
Arguments
can be made in many forms, but two of the most useful are essays and pictures.
Every society faces some set of moral or practical issues. The issues are sometimes
the same throughout generations but many times different issues faces each
generation. Two of the most pressing issues of this generation are illegal
immigration and the prison system.
In
Figure 2.1 of Writing Arguments, a
man is holding a sign that says, “It’s illegal to hire illegals.” Illegal
immigration is one of the greatest issues of this generation. These illegal
immigrants come to the U.S. for work opportunities that are not available where
they are originally from. By no means do these people come to the U.S. to get
rich. They come to support their families, and not just immediate family but
all of their family. They could be supporting up to twenty people on pay far
below minimum wage. These immigrants have become a major element in the work
force of the U.S. and there could be close to twenty million of them here at
any given time. The man holding the sign makes a valid point. Not only are the
illegal immigrants breaking the law but so are any people that hire them.
Unemployment is very high in the U.S. and illegal immigrants are taking jobs
away from legal citizens. One major problem arises here, the generally
population of U.S. citizens are lazy and proud. They would rather be unemployed
than be working ten hours a day doing construction or landscaping. They would
never work for under minimum wage but these illegal immigrants are satisfied
with many making any money at all. Illegal immigration is also related to
another problem the U.S. faces right now and that is the failing prison system.
In
Kwame Anthony Appiah’s essay “What Will Future Generations Condemn Us For?”, some
of societies biggest moral and social problems are examined. This prison system
becomes worse and worse as more and more people are added to it. The problem is
becoming worse not getting better at all. A prison has two main functions. The first
is to keep people that are dangerous away from the rest of society and punish
them for breaking the law and the second is to deter people from breaking the
law. The prisons are overcrowded with quite a few people who do not truly
belong there. Overcrowding has resulted in reduced sentences for many
prisoners. Someone who was given five years in prison might only spend 18
months because the prisons are too full. This no longer deters people from
committing crimes. People who truly belong to be in prison are being set free
and those who could be innocent are forced to stay in these overcrowded,
violent prisons.
I think it is important to address the faults that lie in the hands of employers when it comes to illegal immigration, as well as the pride and sloth of Americans who will not work for the same wages- both of which you did well without going on any rants or extensive tangents.
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